Poem Pong
Poem Pong
I post and wait
And wait and wait
You post a crit
You think is fit
I read your words
think some are turds
You think it’s weak
I think you reek
I craft new rhymes
You call them crimes
You fault the measure
I think is treasure
I post a rant
You say recant
I find your crit
Is all legit!!
I then revise
Revise revise
Five versions strong
That ping and pong
From crit to draft
To me gone daft
I know it’s best
To let it rest
But love the game:
Always the same.
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Ralph
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