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Unread 11-30-2023, 09:57 PM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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I love the little jolt of the imperfect "Earth" rhyme, the eerie off-ness of which clearly signals a transition as clearly as the stanza break.

Perhaps something like

     whose motivation, just like theirs, is Love.
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