The rhyming is delightful, though I must say that I had to look up "epicaricacy." Are you sure you want to be that far out there with vocabulary? There are some clichés, such as "hopping on a bandwagon." I don't mind them when you turn them into a pun, as you do with "pile on." I like all of the punning on trees. Have you considered "out of their trees" as an option? "Evolution" seems an odd title when your point is that we haven't evolved one bit.
Susan
|