Tweaks posted above.
Dear Susan, Andrew, Roger, Jim, Ralph, Carl, John, and Ralph,
I'm relieved that this rather didactic piece has gone over as well as it has. Thanks very much for the encouragement. It means a lot.
Susan, I've changed the title to something that I hope will seem to apply immediately to #1, but will evolve into another meaning by the end. I've also trimmed the bandwagon bit to evoke the cliché without quoting so much of it.
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