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Unread 12-06-2023, 10:33 AM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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Beautiful, John. Perhaps de-capitalize the pronoun "With" in the title?

Like Carl, I'm not sure if the last line is 100% there. Maybe it is. I'll need to mull it over some more.
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