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Unread 12-20-2023, 12:45 PM
Roger Slater Roger Slater is offline
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I like it, except I'm not sure why the raven pops up in the poem. Some sort of Poe allusion, I guess, but I think your hands are full with Keats. Maybe omit that stanza?
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