I've always found that quantity gets in the way of quality. If you're always writing new poems and never spend more time with old ones they don't get a chance to evolve. I've got a few that have taken about three or four entirely different forms. Whether the final one is any good is worth asking, but it's always better than, and indiscernable from, the first one.
FWIW, I didn't mind reading through this but I agree that it could put more focus on the theme and use more illuminating language.
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