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Unread 12-20-2023, 08:17 PM
Max Goodman Max Goodman is offline
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The title and L12 hint at misgivings about killing. If this is a large part of what the poem means to be about, it might explore the similarities between the two types of lost innocence without the misdirection, which contributes to my feeling that the poem, in this version, is meant as a joke.

FWIW.
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