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Hi Susan,

My punctuation in poetry is often a parallel to riding paying little deference to ‘proper’ rule. I will use commas as half halts, as directives to the reading. Not always well.

Hi Cameron,

I agree the title is woeful. It is not what I meant at all. I expend my energies in writing and flail around when it comes to the title. Initially I tend to use them as directives which is quite wrong. I will chew on it.

Hi John,

This is not political in the way that it seems you have taken it, there is the misperception. I had to look up Falwell and he is no bedfellow of mine. Australian perceptions of American politics and religion tend to be ones of WTF.

This is a tilt at hubris which is unfortunately universal.

Hi James

I agree. But the pen that wrote this ran out of inspirational ink and the titling pen, a dull prosaic one is sluggish in the extreme.

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