I do not think that satire can be served in a compressed form such as this. In that sense it is spurious as this was not penned as, nor is satire.
Hi Jim,
There comes a point where I think I have done enough but this never lasts, there comes a point when I think I have compressed enough and this too never lasts.
I am a little unsure of your comments re ‘triune’ and ‘trinity’. The concept, or at least, my concept of ‘triune’ is the often three part nature that can be drawn of humanity. Fool, Sant, Hero. Poet, Philosopher, Priest. Musician, Mathematician, Hermit. And so on. ‘Trinity’ lol being brought up a catholic constrains much of my perception.
Totally agree Jim about the title. It is an ongoing problem of mine.
Hi Alexandra,
Thank you. I would hope that I can always transcend logic in some way as I see that as the under pinning of poetry as compared to prose.
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