I like this too, Jan. I love its raw rollicking energy. There's an Australian term that doesn't come to mind at the moment. I hope it will later.
The longer last line in each verse is very effective.
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Originally Posted by Carl Copeland
love the Bob-Dylanesque litany of incongruous items.
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Yes. Absolutely. With all the "with" and "and" I found it was "Sad-Eyed Lady of the Lowlands" that kept coming to mind, but with a touch of "Subterranean Homesick Blues" too.
Cheers
David