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Unread 01-19-2024, 03:39 PM
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Originally Posted by W T Clark View Post
John, I feel like this could be gutted... give meditation a kind of animal energy: the pure animal body of the dog is what interests me, I want something more physical, more full of guts. So gut it, as they say: let the guts show more.
Well, now that you put it that way : ) Fantastic insight, Cameron.


Yes I see what he is urging you to do. If you do end up wrestling with this to make it more muscular it would in fact become an unusual meditation.

As is, you might be able to slip it into a collection somewhere in the middle. But that's not where you want to leave it, I'm sure.


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