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Hi Ralph, I know I'm late in responding to this. I hope I'm not crossing the time-line of bumping something up when it's been going down for awhile... I had begun preparing a comment when you first posted this but don't know where it went. It's a buried bone.
But I circled back to it today and read it and at the very least wanted to say that I, too, liked the unleashed quality to the thought process on display and how it is a sample of the creative mind in free thought mode. It happily follows its nose, goes down rabbit holes, ping pongs from revelation to revelation without pretense and with no clear motive other than to make your thoughts known. It's refreshing to see.
Although I haven't actually tested it out to see if it would work, it seems to me it would easily slip into Joycean-like language (somewhere between the style of Ulysses and Finnegans Wake) if you removed all the punctuation. Hmm.
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