I like this very much. My only suggestion would be to drop "the" from before "tedium."
Actually, I'm not sure I like "tedium" either. You're sort of forcing it to serve as an opposite of song, which I don't think is on point, but mostly I object because it doesn't make sense that the people are angry to lose their tedium. Certainly the angry people would not claim to prefer tedium. That is the speaker's judgment, not theirs.
Last edited by Roger Slater; 03-07-2024 at 04:18 PM.
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