I think this is quite good and makes great use of the form. I thought all the couplets, though different, were quite pointed in suggesting reasons the speaker might have been ghosted. The one exception for me was the fourth couplet, which doesn't really make sense since the speaker knows quite well that she hasn't been ghosted because her friend has gone blind, so she wouldn't ask if the blindness was literal. I'd vote for just omitting that couplet, but either way this is fine work.
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