I love it. I think this poem is meant to be read aloud. So much assonance and alliteration, rhyme and near rhyme. It is long, but I don't think it's TOO long. And the pace is fast - like skiing downhill! I need to read it many more times, but I don't mind a bit; it's fun.
Annie
PS I had no idea what a piste maker was. I had to Google.
Last edited by annie nance; 03-17-2024 at 03:19 AM.
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