So much conflated here. The first time I read your work I felt the opacity was an affectation of arrogance knowing it could not be dismissed as laziness. I apologise for dismissing and that was my laziness.
A question. Goff? Or your own coining.
Here you almost beg a noose/nous tension.
The meter is loose but their is a native music in the lines. Definitely not prosaic.
The last two lines also beg Cyclops or Odin. I would plump for Odin there is a price for wisdom.
Last edited by Jan Iwaszkiewicz; 03-30-2024 at 09:33 PM.
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