Thread: Untitled Love
View Single Post
  #9  
Unread 04-03-2024, 03:51 AM
Joe Crocker Joe Crocker is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Sep 2020
Location: York
Posts: 877
Default

A suggestion for the final line

Keep going, keep going…
is what she said to me
when my lips faltered as I sang
the third verse of a love song
I’d written for her. I didn’t know
she wasn’t listening to the words
but only felt the quiver in them
and how articulate the trembling voice
spoke for the tongue-tied heart.
Reply With Quote