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Unread 04-07-2024, 11:05 AM
Matt Q Matt Q is offline
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Hi Jan,

A quick thought on S2 of the revision: How about "the cup of emptiness" , rather than "the ache" to play off the coffee spoon theme, and in contrast to a cup the overflows?

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Matt
Last edited by Matt Q; 04-08-2024 at 01:23 AM.
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