Thread: Anna Akhmatova—“Requiem” I & II
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Unread 04-11-2024, 09:55 AM
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Welcome, Glenn!

Your translation brought me to tears, so you're doing something right.

Carl's concerns about "So" might be alleviated by moving the conjunction-concept to then end:

     "You can describe this, then?"
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