Thread: An epigram of Paulus Silentiarius
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Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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Would you consider one metrical substitution?

Better your wrinkles, Philinna, than all of the succulent freshness
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Better your wrinkles, Philinna, than all that succulent freshness
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