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Originally Posted by Rick Mullin
Hi Carl,
Yes, name dropping can be annoying, and usually turns me off as a reader. I'm considering how it's working here. Munch as a painter, I'm thinking, is important because I want his landscapes and paintings of trees (especially among his later paintings) to set the stage. With Ibsen, I get a similar psychological portrait, but also a second name drop. So... I'm thinking about it.
Rick
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"
Munch as a painter,
I'm thinking, is important because I want
his landscapes
and paintings of trees
(especially among his later paintings) to set the stage."
...as a painter... I want... landscapes... of trees... to set the stage.
(Stage = Ibsen)
Commission to Paint the Stage
Don't mind me. Just brewing...
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