I like it, Susan! The title immediately made me think of Gwenyth Paltrow's split. I did also get the double meaning of the end but I think it would be clearer if you went a bit darker with this line:
'to banter, connect, deflect, and disengage'
Nothing in that line currently signals rage to me, and I think there might be a way to bring in a hint of it. At present it sounds too fun and also it sounds like the core purpose of Tinder, not something Tinder would assuage us against.
I also think 'love' is a too obvious strawman in this context. I would prefer something like 'All the romance of Tinder'.
|