Thread: What I Wouldn’t Do for Love
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Unread 05-30-2024, 08:28 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Great ghazal, Carl. But a traditional ghazal would never enjamb between two shers, as you do between S6 and S7. Rules are made to be broken. It is up to you whether you want to stick to the tradition or not.

Susan
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