Thread: F. García Lorca, “Wounds of Love”
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Unread 06-02-2024, 11:04 AM
Carl Copeland Carl Copeland is offline
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This is now reading so well! Two thoughts:

This landscape, a gray, encircling ocean.

Without “like,” this is going to be read as two things: landscape and ocean. A colon would clarify it.

How about replacing the fillerish “such” with “me”?
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