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F. García Lorca, “Wounds of Love”
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06-02-2024, 04:25 PM
Glenn Wright
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I put “sleepless” back,
Carl
, since that’s the literal meaning of
sin sueño
.
I changed “bears” to “houses” in S2L4,
Matt
. This clarifies whose hate we are discussing (the scorpion’s), and picks up the alliteration.
Thanks, fellows!
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