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Unread 06-09-2024, 08:29 AM
Julie Steiner Julie Steiner is offline
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Hi, Susan! Enjoyed. You might consider changing this

     It's almost one, which means it's almost two.
     To read the manual fills our hearts with dread,
     so setting dashboard clocks is hard to do.
     It's almost one, which means it's almost two.

to this:

     It's almost one. Which means it's almost two.
     (To read the manual fills our hearts with dread.)
     Since setting dashboard clocks is hard to do,
     it's almost one, which means it's almost two.
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