Hi Alexandra
This feels like a bold step out into a much more sensuous and intuitive poetical landscape than I have heard from you before. It’s quite something. The last line is a stunner.
I was initially put off by the astrological mumbo jumbo at the end. (Sorry, but I am a scientist) Matt’s comments drew me back. He and Carl and Siham make some sharp observations.
Moonsqueeze is a lovely name for it. You have found a well of quicksilver to draw on here.
Joe
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