Mary, nice to see you again! I’ve re-posted the original version of this poem in response to your comment about that—I’ve felt the same desire as you to have that version at my fingertips. Thanks for your feedback on what you have liked and not. While I’ve had various people say that they like “Full Sturgeon Moon” as the title, I haven’t heard anyone speak to the fact that this poem is not just about any full sturgeon moon, it’s about a supermoon, and one with the very particular characteristics described in the notes. To me, it’s important to get at least some of this across. No? Would "Full Sturgeon Supermoon, 2022" be too cumbersome?
Glenn, I’m glad to hear that you’ve been following this poem in its changes and enjoying it. So you feel that the current version is an improvement over the original? I personally do, but I see that my opinion isn’t shared by all. Thank you so much for your good wishes.
Nick, thanks for your thoughts about “witch-kid” vs. “changeling.” Do you think that the latter is at least clearer in meaning than the former was for you? One thing I like about “changeling” is that it brings in a new dimension—that someone or something has secretly swapped out the n’s original views or visions with new ones from somewhere else.
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