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Unread 07-24-2024, 06:03 PM
Nick McRae Nick McRae is offline
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Originally Posted by R. Nemo Hill View Post
You can even keep glass-bottomed, just lose the "a...boat".

Nemo
I agree with W.T. and Nemo, and I could also take or leave thing.

...—down she went into the river and out she came, hard and sleek, glass-bottomed, with a belly full of beauty and face squaring east to meet the dawn.
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