Thank you so much!
1. The idea was her beauty as a weapon is enough to put a soldier out of work, so he'll be left begging for alms.
2. I did not, I am not an archer myself, so I merely used the terms to the best of my knowledge. I don't know if the ambiguity is a windfall or not, but if there's another word for drawn here, I'm not sure what it is.
3. The idea was that pain is made a peer of paradise, and is not naturally. But I do see the confusion, and while I love your idea, I'm struggling to get it to conform to the exact meter I'm using.
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