[Yves S L]

Hello Mark,

So that first quatrain, the cadence of it, the weight on "mystery", come across as if the N had never seen an avocado before, and then wants to make a moment out of it; and the way the sentiment gets echoed with "like the stone of a puzzling fruit" with the emphasis on "puzzling" comes across to me as forced "wonder can be found in common every day things" trope.