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Originally Posted by Mark McDonnell
I've decided to change "galaxies" to "shipwrecks". It is more in keeping with the imagery. I think I was just enamoured by the alliteration with "ghosts".
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PRO: “Galaxies” must have made that line pent. Why didn’t I notice?
CONTRA: A shipwreck usually lies on the bottom and doesn’t go anywhere, so the “falling” is hard to picture. (I’m saying this as if a ship or galaxy falling down the sofa wasn’t odd to begin with!)