[Carl Copeland]

I’m always excited to see a new ghazal, but this one is going to take meditating on. Meanwhile, I suppose you mean “past our divide.” And “glasss” in the fifth sher could lose an “s.”

Here’s an irrelevant comment as a placeholder for a serious critique: “Testing the walls” made me think of “Fawlty Towers”: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwXpsPiJ_WE