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Unread 08-13-2024, 01:21 PM
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I'm getting a whiff of Agatha Christie - "And then there were none." I particularly liked Sagittarius. I wonder if "glide" is the best ending for the final couplet. If you had "Slide" it would go with slippery, and feels more fishy to me (well eely perhaps)

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