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Unread 08-13-2024, 11:51 PM
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Yo, Julie!

Thanks. I know the recipe and have a conventional baker’s dozen, but as my brain shreds the model retreats.

I do think “claw” can be played with: If it’s about a poet, the final line could be:

Launched for his prey, the perfect word.
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