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Unread 09-02-2024, 11:15 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Default Fugitive Blossoms

Perplexed

In August, my white lilacs bloom,
although they ought to bloom in May.
Each drought-stressed branch holds out a spray
as showy as an ostrich plume,
wafting its rapturous perfume.
What's knocked their inner clock astray
.....in August?

Like a dazed bride who fears her groom
will leave her, clutching her bouquet,
deliriously she makes her way
toward dark shapes and uncertain doom
.....in August.

Revisions:
S1L6 "their" was "its"


Note: The form is a rondine.

Last edited by Susan McLean; 09-03-2024 at 10:41 AM.
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