Joe--
Like Glenn, I'm not from the UK, so I didn't know exactly what this was referencing (till I looked it up), but I did perceive that this was some natural wonder that had been defaced in some way. I think though, with Susan, that the narrator's suggestion that a womanly form invites the transgressive touch of hands just lands with a thud (both the slap and the press really made me flinch). I'm thinking that's not what you intended at all?
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