Apologies for not responding sooner, folks.
Susan, you've got me wondering about "settled". I am hoping that people will forgive the momentary confusion in L8.
Hail Mary! Those are good points, well made. I thank you for them. Would inserting "in" ruin the "one to one" aspect?
Thanks Roger. Is this an accent thing, I wonder? To me, "on" and "one" are a perfect rhyme. Which is very convenient for me, of course. I do know people who pronounce "one" as "wun", but that's not me.
And howdy Marshall. I will have a look at those metrical points. Thank you.
Cheers all
David
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