[Barbara Baig]

Hi David,
Coming a bit late to this one, and glad I didn't miss it. I did enjoy it! I like short, succinct poems that suggest more than they explain. I especially enjoyed the last stanza and your most effective use of a fragment at the end. (Yes, I did understand that your life changed in that moment.)

A question: Would you consider a colon instead of a period after Quay, since the rest of the stanza is about what happened there?

Thanks for this one!
Barbara