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Unread 10-08-2024, 04:49 PM
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Cally,

I can't say I understand the lines "a missing boat / an empty man" but I like them very much - I'll be savoring them for a while. A suicide? In some ways it doesn't matter. I feel the last five lines could make a go of it on their own, but I wouldn't want to scupper the rest.

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Ed
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