I like how the title refers to (I’m assuming) the future outcome of the situation, and I think the poem is really good. The pace of the poem is just right-- and it gets there right on time. The close has some significant emotional impact, and I love the Superman/Clark thing—it’s memorable and makes the poem even more vivid, real. Nothing that I can see to pick at at the moment. Enjoyed this quite a bit, John.
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