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Unread 10-23-2024, 07:26 AM
Richard G Richard G is offline
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Hi Matt,

I liked the 'flat pack throne' (though preferred 'bound' to 'built') - the perils of self-assembly.
I got a bit lost at the end though. Isn't what is described in S1 also a type of transformation (or two transformations; the one the woodworm is effecting on the throne, and the one of the worm itself?)
It made the ending feel like a restatement, not something revelatory.

RG.
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