I think it's gorgeous and striking. I love the image of the light outside her closed window, but I'm not sure about the "sunny and fair" wording ... that might just be me though.
The inside/outside dichotomy made sense to me as someone who's been post-operative (though not a mastectomy) and confined to the inside of a room for some time.
Last edited by Hilary Biehl; 10-24-2024 at 10:01 AM.
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