Hi, James—
This is a very touching poem. At first reading I thought the “you” in L1 referred to a wife or loved one, perhaps having passed away years earlier, to whom the N had written the letters and poems. The reference to the hairband seemed to support this. Upon re-reading, though, I decided that the N is addressing his younger self as “you.” He is most interested in his youthful handwriting and use of language. Knowing that your voice has been silenced, the reference to silence in L12 and the N’s search for “a clear note” are very powerful.
I was a bit confused by the reference to dust. I wouldn’t expect dust to unsettle if the closet where the documents are kept is damp.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.
Glenn
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