Hi James,
what confused you
The comma, mainly. What follows note, felt like a new thought, a discovery. That and the switch from plural (page(s), letters, one by one etc) to the singular (string.)
As a noted misreader, please take all this with (at least one) pinch of salt.
Elsewhere, would hate to see the 'unsettled dust' disappear, much taken with that.
(Perhaps I'll go back to "turn" instead of "flip.")
Tease ?
RG.
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