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Unread 11-24-2024, 08:16 AM
Richard G Richard G is offline
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Hi John.

I'm sure the semicolons have been discussed.

Yes, they have.
I don't see their advantage over periods, but that is perhaps an individual decision.
Leaning towards commas.
Overall, I think this attains its goal.

Good enough.

Thanks,
RG.
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