Hi Matt.
My take
Yep, that's pretty much it.
Anyway, what makes the water look (smell) old? Maybe show us that.
Ponds are standing water, so the water has to be 'old', especially during a drought.
I know prose poems can look odd a computer screen,
Yes, I think it's this that bothers me.
Personally, I just my browser window when reading them here
I feel like I'm missing something here. Is there an omission after just? Or is it a contraction?
Ah, another voice for commas. Point made, and taken.
Thanks.
RG.
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