IMO, this poem is a pretty good example of what's essential for poetry to resonate. You've achieved a pretty strong punch with this one with fairly subdued and modest language, and the reason for that, I think, is that your feeling is really coming through. It's emotional content like this where poetry shines.
I agree with Roger that it could be tightened up a bit. But honestly, most of it worked reasonably well for me except the last four lines. The lines themselves have the core of a good close, but the rhythm and execution felt a little off to me.
And I'll just add that my wife and I are coming up on 40, and 50 is feeling uncomfortably close after reading this.
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