Hi Matt,
I enjoyed the N's change of mind, and the understated 'cot-sized plot'.
Couple or three niggles.
S1/L2 - should it be 'I have' not 'I'll have'?
S2/L4 - 'site' gave me pause. Felt out of place (and filler.)
S4/L7-8 - 'I'll rest' instead of 'I'd rest'? And 'have' for 'had'?
RG.
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